Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yakun Kwaad

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Yakun Kwaad

  • Nominated by: Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: His favourite activity is Kwaad-biking. Oh that's terrible. Harrar 17:40, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

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Support

  1. Aqua Unasi 17:47, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
  2. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 23:54, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
  3. Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:19, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
  4. DC 05:17, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
  5. --Eyrezer 10:11, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
  6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:39, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. The unknown date for Kwaad's death in the infobox must die. Say it happened before 25 or 26 ABY or whenever the events of Conquest happened. DC 06:18, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
    • "Before 26ABY". Harrar 16:09, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • As a way to beef up the intro, I'd like to see a little explanation of what "shaping" and the "heresy" of his practice is in the introduction.
      • Expanded — see what you think.
    • Please also explain what shaping and this heresy is in the biography
      • I believe that I've done so.
    • Please do a little bit more to detail what this "final showdown is, between whom? "an event that leads to the showdown at the novel's end" Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:18, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
      • This was a bit difficult as I found myself begin to digress and explain the plot in confusing detail. If you could have a look at what I've written and give it the all clear, that'd be great. Harrar 11:26, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Unfortunately I'm now away until the 10th of September, so I hope that this can pass through, or else it's gonna sit here for a further 2.5 weeks until I can address objections. Cheers guys Harrar 11:26, 21 August 2008 (UTC)