Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Xouri family

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Xouri family

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 20:20, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Evereni <3
• Date Archived: 03:54, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 426 words (127 introduction, 194 body, 105 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 06:42, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
2. Fantastic OOM 224 (he/him) 19:31, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 01:15, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
4. You really managed to get all their pronouns in those two sentences. Bravo. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 03:53, 25 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I think the body could use an image, possibly of Everon? Lewisr (talk) 23:54, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Used an image of the Wanderer ships leaving Everon, does that work? Sanathestarr (talk) 22:11, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I think the caption could be made a bit more relevant to the family itself by including something about them being instrumental in helping the Evereni escape Everon Lewisr (talk) 01:23, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Does the current version work? Sanathestarr (talk) 14:06, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Looks good, thanks Lewisr (talk) 06:41, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
• Would be nice if you could find a way to include The Wanderers, either in writing or pipelinking Lewisr (talk) 23:54, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added a mention of them in the body and hyperlinked the indirect mention of Evereni survivors in intro Sanathestarr (talk) 22:11, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I think upon seeing it might be better to include it in here 'In 500 BBY,[2] the few surviving Evereni left their homeworld' as maybe as 'In 500 BBY,[2] the few surviving Evereni—known as the Wanderers—left their homeworld' How's that for you? Lewisr (talk) 01:23, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Sure, changed. Sanathestarr (talk) 14:06, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
• Similar to Old Gozzo flock, I think you could have a description section and probably move the first couple sentences into that Lewisr (talk) 01:23, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Sanathestarr (talk) 14:06, 21 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:53, 25 January 2024 (UTC)