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X-45 sniper rifle
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 15:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Thought I'd squeeze one more in before the barn-burner's over.
(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)
Support
- Looks good.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:20, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:07, September 7, 2011 (UTC)- <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 00:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 14:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)- Nice barn-burner addition.--Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 23:02, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
- ~Savage
00:56, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 04:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Kilson
In the Intro, you should mention during what time periods the X-45 was used.- Addressed.
- Otherwise, nice job Jinn. Thanks for doing another barn-burner nom. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 22:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 17:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn
Forty-five
Using the X-45 allowed the shooter to pick off his target almost invisibly. I'm not really sure what this means. Who is invisible? Am I dumb, or can it be explained a little more?- Clarified.
As the intro calls the weapon's fragility a downside, can this be communicated in the "Description" section too?- Done.
Should the "The" of "The Riflette" be in quotation marks in the infobox? The article itself doesn't include "the" in quotes. Would just "Riflette" be more appropriate in the infobox, to be consistent with the article?- Addressed.
- Excellent work! Menkooroo 15:45, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 14:31, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn
Prepare to be savaged…
Just one thing: Gundark's and Arms & Equipment Guide should both include an "availability" value that tells you how widely available the weapon was. Can you check that and include the info in the "History" section somewhere? ~Savage
02:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 21:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)