Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Wookiee Cookie

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Wookiee Cookie

• Nominated by: AnilSerifoglu (talk) 11:02, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Waag mam ga moo. Uoo waa gaa moo.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Good job on making me feel bad for a rathtar. Tommy Macaroni 17:06, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
2. The minute these are mentioned in a canon source you're screwed :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:54, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
3. Yummy. 1358 ^(Talk) 14:59, July 10, 2018 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:18, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
6. REDIRECT User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 21:09, July 23, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Grunny

• In the opening quote "Repairs completed sir" there would normally be a comma before "sir," so is that how it's written in the subtitles?
  • Yeah, I thought the same, but I have just double-checked and that's how it is written in subtitles. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 18:45, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
• The first two paragraphs of the History section are missing references.
  • Oops, added now. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 18:45, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
• In the opening sentence of the BTS, the Wookie Cookie first appearing in the video game should be referenced to LEGO Star Wars: The Force Awakens, as you can't source that to the starwars.com article that is currently the only reference for that sentence. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:59, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 18:45, March 20, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• You should just have the year of release for LEGO Star Wars: The Force Awakens, so you can remove the other ref and just source it to the product itself, like you've done for the Holiday Special.
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:01, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Context for Finn and Rey, and maybe just say that 3PO and BB-8 are droids.
  • Is that sufficient? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:01, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I think that's great. Tommy Macaroni 17:06, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
• "30" should be as "thirty". Tommy Macaroni 09:43, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:01, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Toprawa

• We require that infobox images be 400px whenever possible for technical reasons. The article's other LEGO video game images are of sufficient resolution, so you should be able to get at least a 400px version of the infobox image. Might have to adjust the crop a little wider out. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:06, May 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:35, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
• The Description section should detail which species were able to eat the food. Here is a recently passed GA as an example. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:05, May 7, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:45, May 7, 2018 (UTC)
• One-sentence paragraphs are not ideal. See if you can find a way to expand the first "paragraph" of the History to be able to produce two sentences. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:18, May 7, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:45, May 7, 2018 (UTC)
• Is the main quote transcribed exactly from the source? Because there should normally be a comma before "sir" in the first sentence.
  • Grunny had pointed out the same, but that's indeed how it is written in the game's subtitles. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:13, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
    • Very well. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:18, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
• This sentence could use a little bit more context. When did he carry them aboard the Falcon? "The cookies were favored by the Wookiee warrior Chewbacca, who carried some aboard the starship Millennium Falcon."
  • Just added it myself. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:06, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
    • Oh thanks! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:13, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
• How do we know they were "usually" stored in jars? Are there multiple instances where we seem them stored in jars, or are you just extrapolating this from one appearance? "Usually stored in jars, the cookies could be eaten by humans, Sullustans and Wookiees." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:57, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • In their all three appearances in the game (Endor, rathtar hunting and Starkiller Base), the cookies were in jars. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:13, July 23, 2018 (UTC)
    • Very good. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:18, July 23, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• The body is lacking dates and context in several places. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:44, June 3, 2018 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:09, June 7, 2018 (UTC)
• Sorry for the delay! One more thing, could you subsection the bio? If there's another suitable quote you could add it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:14, June 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • I've divided the History section into three subsections, but unfortunately there isn't any suitable quotes for two of them. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:25, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:10, July 23, 2018 (UTC)