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Winborn
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:37, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: CSF Chief during the Cold War
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:28, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 02:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC)- 501st Dogma
(Comlink) 17:50, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:58, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
Context to the Market and the Guild in the intro and bio.- Done.
Context for the head quote?- Done.
Make it clearer that Coruscant is his homeworld in the intro.- Done.
That Kayl was governement leader is intro-exclusive.- Done.
Winborn had light skin with brown hair and green eyes. Winborn led the CSF and his men with a sense of command and authority. However, he felt out of his depth with anything involving major politics: Please replace one of the "Winborn"'s.- Done.
Context for The Old Republic in the BtS.- Done.
- All for now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:16, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:54, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
Since you do not link to a specific individual in regards to the Republic individual, I assume that the mission is open to all playable classes, yes? If so, I feel that this should be noted in the BTS.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:14, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 16:36, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
I will be traveling internationally till May 28 and so will have limited internet connection. I will try to address any other objections as they come but there may be lengthy activity absences. Coruscantfan (Talk) 13:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)