Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Winborn

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Contents

  • 1 Winborn
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lee's charge
        • 1.1.2.2 Cav
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Winborn

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:37, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CSF Chief during the Cold War

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:28, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote --Eyrezer 02:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC)
  3. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 17:50, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:58, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Context to the Market and the Guild in the intro and bio.
    • Done.
  • Context for the head quote?
    • Done.
  • Make it clearer that Coruscant is his homeworld in the intro.
    • Done.
  • That Kayl was governement leader is intro-exclusive.
    • Done.
  • Winborn had light skin with brown hair and green eyes. Winborn led the CSF and his men with a sense of command and authority. However, he felt out of his depth with anything involving major politics: Please replace one of the "Winborn"'s.
    • Done.
  • Context for The Old Republic in the BtS.
    • Done.
  • All for now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:16, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review! Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:54, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • Since you do not link to a specific individual in regards to the Republic individual, I assume that the mission is open to all playable classes, yes? If so, I feel that this should be noted in the BTS. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:14, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 16:36, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

I will be traveling internationally till May 28 and so will have limited internet connection. I will try to address any other objections as they come but there may be lengthy activity absences. Coruscantfan (Talk) 13:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)