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Weeping maya tree

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 18:10, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Went over from CAN
  • Date Archived: 18:13, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 442 words (82 introduction, 275 body, 85 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 313 words (31 introduction, 197 body, 85 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote OOM 224 (he/him/they) 08:27, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 17:59, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  4. CometSmudge (talk) 03:09, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 18:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • Gonna be very nit-picky with my one objection here and say that "large boughs" seems to violate NPOV—but I think it's worth mentioning that the branches were brown. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:33, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Ok I think it should be fine now. Wok142 (talk) 17:58, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
      • Brilliant OOM 224 (he/him) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Dani
  • Should specify Omega's brothers names. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 16:57, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
  • "Pabu" features Omega, Wrecker, and Lyana Hazard, resting against the tree (around 23:28). Could you recheck the various episodes for any interactions with the tree's base. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 16:57, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
    • I had combed through the episodes to confirm appearances and don't remember anything I found super significant, but I will go through it again. That being said, I won't have access to Disney+ for a bit so this might take me a few days. Wok142 (talk) 19:46, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
  • The history section will need to be cleaned up (one sentence paragraphs) as well as checked for double links. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 23:36, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
    • I believe it should be fine now. Wok142 (talk) 06:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • The intro could use a date for the Ventress stuff Lewisr (talk) 18:18, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Added. Wok142 (talk) 23:01, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
      • That appears to be inconsistent to what the body suggests Lewisr (talk) 20:38, 21 June 2024 (UTC
        • Oops, corrected. Wok142 (talk) 23:10, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
  • I think it'd be worth putting in the intro that Omega did retrieve a white blossom Lewisr (talk) 20:40, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:12, 23 June 2024 (UTC)