- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Watkins
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 12:10, April 17, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Most Star Wars-y name ever.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 04:32, April 24, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 10:03, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
MasterFred(Whatever) 03:56, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
- AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:18, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 17:30, May 26, 2018 (UTC)
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Toprawa
Are you taking the article's quotes from game captions?- Yes, those are taken from captions. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 18:11, May 21, 2018 (UTC)
- So, just to clarify, the game's captions actually place this comma next to the ellipsis like this (which I will point out is equally unnecessary and silly on their part)? "I know we're trying to avoid detection,…but" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:01, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
- You can check it out for yourself. It's right at the beginning of the video. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 09:31, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
- You can check it out for yourself. It's right at the beginning of the video. QuiGonJinn
- So, just to clarify, the game's captions actually place this comma next to the ellipsis like this (which I will point out is equally unnecessary and silly on their part)? "I know we're trying to avoid detection,…but" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:01, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, those are taken from captions. QuiGonJinn
Can we be more specific here than took out? Destroyed or neutralized, maybe? "The remainder of Grey Squadron then took out an orbiting Imperial-class Star Destroyer and left the planet."- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 18:11, May 21, 2018 (UTC)
- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
Video games almost always include some kind of copyright date somewhere on the packaging or load screens. I'm assuming the year 2009 is found somewhere therein, which would allow you to source the game's publication year to the game itself rather than relying on reference 3. Just say "developed by N-space and released in 2009."Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:49, May 19, 2018 (UTC)- Done. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 18:11, May 21, 2018 (UTC)
- Done. QuiGonJinn
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:33, May 26, 2018 (UTC)