- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Vuchelle
- Nominated by: --Eyrezer 03:34, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 00:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 02:02, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
Wow, this is actually 250 words? Cull Tremayne 00:46, 19 December 2008 (UTC)- SinisterSamurai 06:33, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:36, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
Object
Mention the deaths of the two Jedi and the Judiciaries in the body. All you have at the moment is "some losses" in the intro.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 10:04, 13 December 2008 (UTC)- Sure, although I'm trying to be careful just to include information appropriate to a Planet article, and keep it different from the forthcoming Battle article that depicts that same event... --Eyrezer 16:44, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
- Ah. Good luck with it. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 00:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, although I'm trying to be careful just to include information appropriate to a Planet article, and keep it different from the forthcoming Battle article that depicts that same event... --Eyrezer 16:44, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
Since I'm assuming no battle exists for this skirmish, I think it would be good to create a pipelinked redlink someplace for its future creation.- Actually it is already linked in the intro, just wasn't in the body. --Eyrezer 04:09, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
Can we say who believed this? The Republic? The media? "The last of these fighters was believed to have been caught in Vuchelle's gravity well and burned up on re-entry."- A bit added
Why, specifically, are we guessing at this? "It is likely they are in the same system."Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:02, 19 December 2008 (UTC)- Added a bit of reasoning. Let me know if you think it is too OR. --Eyrezer 04:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
- Unless something says that the pirates operated exclusively out of their own system or something, I would just cut it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
- Cut. --Eyrezer 15:40, 29 December 2008 (UTC)
- Unless something says that the pirates operated exclusively out of their own system or something, I would just cut it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
- Added a bit of reasoning. Let me know if you think it is too OR. --Eyrezer 04:18, 28 December 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:36, 31 December 2008 (UTC)