Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vooz Nooxoo Una

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Vooz Nooxoo Una

  • Nominated by: Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 02:22, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The amazing plant man!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Add this guy and Blackhole to your RPG campaign, and your players'll say if this is Spider-Man: The RPG --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:54, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. JangFett (Talk) 17:49, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:00, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Completely. Awesome. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:44, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Keep up the good work. :) Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 18:55, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Excellent work. Very clean. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:29, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Farlstendoiro and his interest in pre-Saga RPG's
    • A bounty was placed on Una which was later archived in the Imperial Enforcement DataCore. Ambiguity: Was Una archived in the DataCore? Or was the bounty? Please reword
      • Reworded.
    • The RPG stats reveal other traits, including Una being a polyglot (Speaks Basic, Huttese, Rodese and Quarren), and having some medical training (Treat Injury skill).
      • Added.
    • The image provides more information about the visual aspect of the armor, including its color, root-like boots, mostly antropomorphic shape, shoulder pads and whatever-you-want-to-call shape of the helmet. That could also be added.
      • Added.
    • Very good job! Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:25, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Just one: a slight chronolgy issue. In the bio you say he became a vigilante after the plant armor began to affect his mind, but in the intro you imply that he was originally a vigilante, even before he began wearing the armor. Which is correct? Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 18:40, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
    • The first. I fixed up the wording slightly. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 18:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:35, April 21, 2010 (UTC)