Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vontaige

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Vontaige

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 02:07, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Yet another minor TOTJ character!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 05:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
2. Good work. Grunny ^(Talk) 16:17, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:33, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 01:56, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
5. --Xd1358 ^Talk 07:14, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • Vontaige served as one of the top advisors to Empress Teta, the ruler of the seven unified worlds of the Koros system, and was an important general in Teta's military. Vontaige served under Teta in the Unification Wars of the Koros system, fighting against rebels on the world of Kirrek. Teta was victorious in the Unification Wars, and Vontaige took his place at her side as one of her top advisors. This is chronologically a little confusing. You start out with him being a top adviser, then him fighting the rebels, and then him becoming a top advisor (again). Please clarify. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 22:21, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 01:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
       • Little repetitive setence beginnings now. Vontaige, Vontaige served as, Vontaige served under. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 01:32, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
         • Addressed.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:02, November 23, 2009 (UTC)