Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vob Bitas

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Vob Bitas

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 05:22, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: For the CUSWE! I used to go there all the time. Cheers to Bob Vitas.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 23:03, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Interesting story. Getting killed for cheating is tough. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote I want a blob. 1358 (Talk) 00:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Also known as the host of This Old House. ~SavageBOB sig 16:09, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • A few minor things. We know canonically, as is alluded to in this article, that cheating on Umgul is punishable by death. Might it be worth actually establishing this point in so many words within the article at some point?
  • Also, I don't think there's really a policy or anything on this, but I feel like the items in the External links should be listed in order of officialness. Might I recommend the Blog entries come before CUSWE? Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:38, February 9, 2012 (UTC)
    • A fine idea, and done. Thanks for adding the archive links to cite_web, by the way. That's something I need to add to all of my old articles, too. Menkooroo 00:25, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
      • No problem. It's something I try to look for whenever I see citeweb being used. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • Not sure about the second sentence of P&T. Do you think it's pertinent to note he died in this section, since it's in the bio?
    • Nixed the part about his death, and tweaked the former part a bit so that it's about Bitas being unable to keep the cheating under wraps rather than about Bitas dying.
  • In BTS, you say Vitas had some "notoriety" among SW fans. Is that the proper word? "Notoriety" implies fame for the bad reasons to me. Maybe "name recognition" would work? ~SavageBOB sig 13:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
    • Good call. Re-worded it to call him notable instead of notorious. Thanks for the review! Menkooroo 14:50, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)