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Vo Lian
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Support
- Harrar 15:17, 21 May 2008 (UTC)
- Greyman@wikia(Talk) 23:54, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
- Short and sweet. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:32, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Worth my time.—Tommy(There are no Jedi here) 18:33, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:46, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
Would it be possible to get a quick mention in the P&T of where you say Lian is "willing to kill at a moment's notice"? Just a quick example, to add some body to that sentence. Greyman@wikia(Talk) 02:20, 24 May 2008 (UTC)- Toprawa:
I'm not sure what this means exactly. Experimenting how? A little elaboration would do a lot to clarify. Additionally, what is one cycle? An orbital rotation? Please clarify: "a building necessary to house the shapers who would be experimenting on any captured Jedi, was installed on the moon within one cycle."I would request that you add a BTS section. It would only need to be a sentence or two long.Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:43, 30 May 2008 (UTC)- Thanks for your input, I've addressed both of these—I excised the "cycle" altogether because although that is how Vootuh stipulates Lian's time limit, it isn't clear to what he's referring to, and so I just feel we can infer that he means "do it quickly". If you don't think that's good, let me know.Harrar 12:47, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
- I'll trust your judgment, having never read this book. Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:32, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for your input, I've addressed both of these—I excised the "cycle" altogether because although that is how Vootuh stipulates Lian's time limit, it isn't clear to what he's referring to, and so I just feel we can infer that he means "do it quickly". If you don't think that's good, let me know.Harrar 12:47, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
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