Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vo Dasha

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Vo Dasha

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:45, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Before you ask, no applicable quotes.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. I find your lack of errors disturbing. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:23, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
2. Floyd has done great justice to the WP:TOTJ war effort. Vo Dasha is yet another testament to his dedication to the project.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 14:39, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
   • Gracias, mi amigo. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:15, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
3. Ooh, I like it. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 04:41, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
4. Beautiful image. Xicer9^(Combadge) 05:03, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 02:01, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oppose

Xd

• Intro: "By 4,000 BBY, Vo Dasha and the surrounding area had fallen under the influence of Stenness Node-based crime lord Bogga the Hutt, who placed his estate and base of operations on Vo Dasha."
  History: "By 4,000 BBY Vo Dasha had fallen under the influence of Stenness Node-based crime lord Bogga the Hutt, who placed his estate and base of operations on the moon."
  Almost identical sentences. Could you slightly reword one of them? -- 1358 ^(Talk) 06:50, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • Changed the sentence in the History section up a bit. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:15, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Jon

• "These individuals included Bogga himself, Grimorg, and many of his slaves." Which "his?" Bogga's or Grimorg's? Otherwise, quite nice work, although if I catch you using "him and his gang" again I'll have to hurt you. :P Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 01:24, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:58, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)