Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vo Dasha

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Vo Dasha

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:45, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Before you ask, no applicable quotes.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. I find your lack of errors disturbing. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:23, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Floyd has done great justice to the WP:TOTJ war effort. Vo Dasha is yet another testament to his dedication to the project.—Tommy 9281 14:39, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Ooh, I like it. -- 1358 (Talk) 04:41, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Beautiful image. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 05:03, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 02:01, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 19:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oppose

Xd
  • Intro: "By 4,000 BBY, Vo Dasha and the surrounding area had fallen under the influence of Stenness Node-based crime lord Bogga the Hutt, who placed his estate and base of operations on Vo Dasha."
    History: "By 4,000 BBY Vo Dasha had fallen under the influence of Stenness Node-based crime lord Bogga the Hutt, who placed his estate and base of operations on the moon."
    Almost identical sentences. Could you slightly reword one of them?     -- 1358 (Talk) 06:50, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
    • Changed the sentence in the History section up a bit. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:15, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Jon
  • "These individuals included Bogga himself, Grimorg, and many of his slaves." Which "his?" Bogga's or Grimorg's? Otherwise, quite nice work, although if I catch you using "him and his gang" again I'll have to hurt you. :P Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 01:24, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:39, June 5, 2010 (UTC)