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Veteran Services
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:43, 15 June 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WookieeProject Catalyst lives again?
- Date Archived: 00:01, 28 July 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 584 words (104 introduction, 464 body, 16 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 598 words (104 introduction, 478 body, 16 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
Yay Catalyst noms, I should go find some to write up from this excellent novel. Wok142 (talk) 22:54, 28 June 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 19:57, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 04:27, 26 July 2025 (UTC)- SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 23:19, 27 July 2025 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 23:59, 27 July 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Wok
Clone Wars can have context in the intro- Done! I think arguably since it had context in the body it was fine, but its no issue Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:56, 16 June 2025 (UTC)
Instead of saying "using" former Separatist equipment, I would say "involving," as its only the cargo itself that was formerly CIS, not the actual equipment they used to smuggle it.Wok142 (talk) 16:35, 16 June 2025 (UTC)- Done! Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:56, 16 June 2025 (UTC)
Last thing, the final sentence in the History section is quite long. I think it should be split into at least two different sentences. This can also include some condensing/cutting of information if you wanted, as all of the context behind the whole shadow smuggling stuff isn't strictly necessary for the topic of Veterans Services (p.s. feel free to message me on Discord when this has been addressed as I am taking a Wookieevacation and probably won't be checking this page).Wok142 (talk) 20:43, 22 June 2025 (UTC)- Dmed you to ask Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:37, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
Lew
The BTS says it was mentioned, while the appearance section says it appeared. Just wanted to clarify which was the rightLewisr (talk) 00:15, 26 July 2025 (UTC)- Fixed! Editoronthewiki (talk) 03:59, 26 July 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:01, 28 July 2025 (UTC)