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Vetch
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:31, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Shame this guy didn't show up in any of the later episodes
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- LucaRoR
(Talk) 16:20, 29 November 2022 (UTC) 
Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:39, 5 December 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 13:46, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
- What an absolute g JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:46, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 21:41, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
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Braha
I think it'd be good to mention Ian Whyte has been doing Star Wars stuff prior to this, especially since he's played another notable Urodel as well.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:35, 25 November 2022 (UTC)- Added a sentence, how does it look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:58, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
Luca
I think the shirt is yellow with grey pockets and buttons (I guess?).- Added the gray, but don't think we need to specify the exact color breakdown. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:35, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
I'm not sure why the imagecat is under N&R instead of Appearances since it does not seem to me that it would interfere.- I usually try and avoid it cutting off the heading line, but guess that's preferable to it indenting one of the references. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:35, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- (Review note) Make sure to be okay with my copy-edit, and great work! :) LucaRoR (Talk) 13:05, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
- I am indeed, thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:35, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
"In 5 BBY, Nurchi asked Vetch to help him get back a deposit from Andor..." - do we know whether Vetch was aware of what Nurchi was asking him to do, other than the standing? From the episode only, it doesn't seem apparent, unless is said elsewhere. I was considering that perhaps the way the intro has it might be more accurate: "...whom the spare parts vendor Nurchi used to try and threaten the human Cassian Andor" but that clause doesn't fit easily into the current wording, so was curious if you could take a look.- How does that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
- Much thanks.—spookywillowwtalk 13:46, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
- How does that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Would Nurchi's stall end up being notable enough for an article of the business? Unsure if it appears in other scenes, otherwise would've stubbed it.—spookywillowwtalk 01:44, 4 December 2022 (UTC)- Hmm, I swear I remember it being mentioned in the audio description, but now can't find it at all. Not sure if it's notable since we can't really tell if it's a permanent fixture or just a table he's set up that specific day. If it's the latter then I'd say probably not? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for checking. Had been unsure if the stall continued to appear briefly throughout the following episodes (which would've proved it's permanence for article's sake) but if it was temporary, then indeed isn't notable enough.—spookywillowwtalk 13:46, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm, I swear I remember it being mentioned in the audio description, but now can't find it at all. Not sure if it's notable since we can't really tell if it's a permanent fixture or just a table he's set up that specific day. If it's the latter then I'd say probably not? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:41, 24 December 2022 (UTC)