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Venisa's helmet
- Nominated by: NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 20:03, 21 November 2024 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Sidequest done. PS: I love Venisa Doza.
- Date Archived: 17:44, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 642 words (74 introduction, 430 body, 138 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 641 words (69 introduction, 431 body, 141 behind the scenes)
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 22:25, 29 November 2024 (UTC)- Wok142 (talk) 03:30, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 17:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)- Imma be honest, the notability was suspect, but I decided to keep it for the Bts info about the intentional weathering and it being rigged to raise up but that feature never being used. :P Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 17:43, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Object
Wok
In History, the way the first sentence is constructed kind of makes it potentially read like she is also wearing Torch. I think it would read better if you didn't have the mdashes in there and also said "alongside" instead of "along with"Wok142 (talk) 22:35, 1 December 2024 (UTC)- Makes sense, done. NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 23:57, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Makes sense, done. NBDani
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:43, 16 December 2024 (UTC)