Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Varko

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Varko

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:04, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Finally getting around to the old man. Let's go, WP:KOTOR!

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 23:32, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Pre-nom reviewed. —MJ— Jedi Council Chambers Monday, June 18, 2012, 23:54 UTC
  3. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:57, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:09, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Plagueis327 (talk) 19:24, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 01:04, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • P&T section could have his skin, hair, and eye color added.
  • Thats all, good work. 501st dogma(talk) 22:50, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review, please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:58, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Please fill in "before-years" in the succession box.
  • "In-game, Varko is referred to as a commander by Darth Malak; however, the dialogue box showed that the character was an admiral." Is it assumed in this article, then, that the commander dialogue was in error? That should be mentioned to wrap up the inconsistency. CC7567 (talk) 04:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Taken care of both, I believe. Please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 07:38, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
      • Please remember WP:DASH next time for dates—an en dash was needed. CC7567 (talk) 01:04, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:04, July 19, 2012 (UTC)


  • Thanks to Master Jonathan for a pre-nom copy-edit and review.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:06, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • You might want to clarify that by being second-in-command he was under Malak in the leadership hierarchy. 501st dogma(talk) 23:32, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • I won't object to this since it is so minor, but does the in-game text actually read "300%" for the quote "...it is operating at nearly 300% of our projections"?—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:57, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
    • I double-checked the dialogue files, and yes, the text does read as is.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:07, June 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • I replayed the game, and Malak's dialogue calls Varko a commander, yet the in-game dialogue box lists the character as "Admiral Varko." I believe this has been properly addressed in the BTS, please advise.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:12, July 8, 2012 (UTC)