- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Valara Saar
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Support
- Nomination. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
00:30, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hey, the first time an article I worked at reaches the GAN! I am almost ashamed. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 17:31, 15 September 2007 (UTC)
- Greyman(Paratus) 16:59, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
- -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:09, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
- I've worked on this one too.--Goodwood 19:43, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
Just a couple of things:- The article needs to be fully sourced per GAN requirements.
- The intro could stand to be quite a bit longer than the current one sentence.
Infobox information needs to be sourced.- Though it's not really an objection, but more of a comment, would it be possible to get a P&T and P&A out her information?
- Greyman(Paratus) 00:44, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oops. Forgot to upload the sourced version from the changes. I think I expanded the introductory paragraph a little bit more. Does this help? Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
01:02, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
- Okay, I thinks all fixed up. Thanks, Greyman. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
17:19, 15 September 2007 (UTC)
- Okay, I thinks all fixed up. Thanks, Greyman. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
- Oops. Forgot to upload the sourced version from the changes. I think I expanded the introductory paragraph a little bit more. Does this help? Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
- Greyman(Paratus) 00:44, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
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