Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Vahla

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Vahla

• Nominated by:jSarek 10:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Seems it's Grunny's turn to rope me into nominating one of my past articles. :-p

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Happy to support. ~ SavageBob 18:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 22:50, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 07:18, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
4. Grunny ^(Talk) 07:18, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Prepare to be savaged...
   • Just a few things, and I think this one's good to go. First off, consider making an article for the Vahla homeworld. Even if it's unknown to them, it presumably exists, no? I faced this same problem with the Morseerians and Ugors, so you can check out those articles if you need an explanation of what I'm talking about.
     • Done. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
   • "Twisted, decadent people" sounds POV; is there a way to skirt this? That's it! ~ SavageBob 05:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
     • Hopefully, successfully skirted. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
2. Soresu
   • Just a small objection: what does fiery tests mean? Literally related to fire, filled with hardship, or what?
     • The original text says "a number of dangerous and fiery trials." Given the nature of the Ember of Vahl, that *probably* means literally, but I hesitate to say with any certainty. jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
   • I like the writing style :). SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 02:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
     • I was going to make some snarky comment about this not being a valid objection, but they all came out sounding mean. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) jSarek 08:44, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
       • If you don't like the objection, then I'll strike it. I take back what I said about the writing style :D SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 22:50, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)