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Vader's diary
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:11, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: 965 words
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Support
- Happy birthday. LucaRoR
(Talk) 06:58, 3 March 2022 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:29, 27 March 2022 (UTC)- What did I just read 1358 (Talk) 15:36, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 17:19, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 16:29, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
Object
Luca
The words that are written boldly in the comic should be italicized in the quote.- Done
I'd like to see some context for Darth Vader upon his first mention in "Description"- Done
"He also that he had little time to write…" is something missing in this sentence?- Fixed
The intro could use a paragraph break.Please give a look at my edits.LucaRoR (Talk) 07:52, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
- Oh god, so many spelling mistakes, thanks. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:09, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
I don't think "nitemare" is an actual word. If it is not, [sic] should be used in the quote.LucaRoR (Talk) 15:00, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:04, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
Last thing (I think): "Flashbacks of scenes described in the diary with greyscale illustrations constitute most of the comic." I don't think this is BTS-worthy.LucaRoR (Talk) 15:18, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
- Removed Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:49, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
As mentioned on Discord: the fact that he documented his day-to-day life is currently intro-exclusive. I would say it's worth mentioning it in the first or second sentence of the History section.LucaRoR (Talk) 12:49, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Done but in the description section. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
- I actually think you should specify in the history section that Vader wrote in the diary before the stormtroopers found it. The section currently only says the Vader "kept the diary in his quarters, hidden under a pile of magazines." LucaRoR (Talk) 08:46, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
- Added Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:20, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
- I actually think you should specify in the history section that Vader wrote in the diary before the stormtroopers found it. The section currently only says the Vader "kept the diary in his quarters, hidden under a pile of magazines." LucaRoR
- Done but in the description section. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Since the misspelling of nitemare is intentional, using [sic] seems unnecessary.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 22 March 2022 (UTC)- I think it's fine to leave it, if anything just to ensure that anyone skimming the page knows that it's meant to be spelt that way in that context Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:01, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
- Using [sic] implies an error, while this isn't one. Removing it would actually allow readers to see that it's meant to be spelled that way as opposed to an authorial mistake. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:21, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
- Removed Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:02, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Using [sic] implies an error, while this isn't one. Removing it would actually allow readers to see that it's meant to be spelled that way as opposed to an authorial mistake. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:21, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
- I think it's fine to leave it, if anything just to ensure that anyone skimming the page knows that it's meant to be spelt that way in that context Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:01, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:29, 31 March 2022 (UTC)