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Unidentified treddroid

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 21:39, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:As I wait for my book to arrive, I decided to nom a droid reminds me of WALL-E with an IPad strapped to his head.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:01, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Didn't LucasFilm originally own Pixar? Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 04:42, October 20, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:07, October 26, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 22:16, October 26, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Make it pass. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:34, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • Double checking on the punctuation in the Biography quote, since technically there is a missing comma there. Is that literally how the source presents it?
    • Good catch. Added. 501st dogma(talk) 23:39, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Typically, there should be no biographical information in the P/T that isn't already described in the Biography. This last sentence of the P/T is just kind of dropped in here with no previous mention of context other than a reliance on the intro quote. I'd like to see this explained more clearly: "It then thanked Plagueis for his comment on the treddroid's usefulness." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:41, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Better? I was afraid I'd got into too much play by play. Thanks for the review, 501st dogma(talk) 23:39, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • Not really. I think the change makes the sentence too much of a run-on right now. Also, where did Palpatine come from? And it's "complimented," not "complemented," and "usefulness," not "usefullness." Are you using FireFox's spellchecker as you write? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:32, October 23, 2012 (UTC)
        • Whoops. Palpatine was not supposed to be typed. That should be better now. And no, I am not using FireFox's spell check. 501st dogma(talk) 20:32, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:37, October 26, 2012 (UTC)