Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified stormtrooper (Level 1997)

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Unidentified stormtrooper (Level 1997)

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:33, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A sub-nom to Anandra Milon

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
2. Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 15:43, October 2, 2014 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:02, October 11, 2014 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 08:02, October 11, 2014 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:22, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Have a good look at the intro, please.
  • Bolded, is that everything I can't spot anything else. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:23, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
• His dead needs to be mentioned in the infobox. "Shortly after the destruction of Alderaan, Coruscant" for example.
  • Without dates I hadn't really thought about it, but included. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:23, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
• "Thrown to his dead": You should mention the catwalk here.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:23, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
• "Confident swagger": I'm curious, can you say that?
  • Changed it to just walked with confidence, is that better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:23, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
• Nice. And you never hit a girl. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:07, September 4, 2014 (UTC)

Zuko's advice

• Are you sure that you linked up everything that could be linked ? Because i think i saw in the some words that could be linked. Try to take care of theses.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 23:23, September 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, October 1, 2014 (UTC)
    • Well done then, you have my support ! Good luck :P --Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 15:42, October 2, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• As this article is under 500 words, you will need to fill out all but one redlink.
  • Made some stubs. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:02, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
• I'm not sure how Canon handles it, but is Stormtrooper supposed to be capitalized?
  • I have no idea why but I was dead certain it was always capitalised. The source doesn't though so fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:02, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
• The death field implies that the Disaster occurred on Coruscant, could you pipelink it to say "Destruction of the planet Alderaan" or something similar?
  • Done. Why is the canon page called disaster? It's such as stupidly vague title for the event. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:02, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
• Could you make it clearer in the body that the destruction of Alderaan is the disaster?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:48, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:02, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• The bolded part in the intro should generally be consistent with the title of the article. You should therefore bold "stormtrooper" instead of Human. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:01, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:46, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:22, October 11, 2014 (UTC)