Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified starburst protuberance species

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Unidentified starburst protuberance species

Nominated by: Eyrezer 06:56, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments: This is an unusual species from The Crystal Star. 280 words.

Everything from The Crystal Star is unusual. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:15, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 14:17, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
My protuberances lean toward support. ~ SavageBob 15:01, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:41, April 7, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:02, April 7, 2011 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 09:44, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

~~I'm not sure "notable" is the right word here since it connotes fame of a sort. Would "distinguished" or "distinctive" work?~~
~~Perhaps a couple of words of context for Lady Ucce in the intro?~~
Can we refer to the servant as an it? Do we know its gender? If it's merely unknown gender, I suggest using a synonym for "servant" instead of "it" here. 'Tis all, sir. ~ SavageBob 04:18, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Should all be addressed now. Thanks for the review and changes. --Eyrezer 06:10, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

~~In the intro, "protuberances" is used in consecutive sentences. Is there any way to vary up the word choice?~~ IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:10, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
- I have to confess that I am guilty of not being overly concerned about a word repeating itself in two sentences. It strikes me almost as a technical term, so I don't want to take too much liberty in straying from it. Thoughts? --Eyrezer 07:31, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
  - I have to agree that "protrusion" is quite vague, making it hard to know whether words like "bump" or "tendril" would work as synonyms. How about "protruding organ"? ~ SavageBob ~ Talk ~ 12:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
    - Eh, I guess its okay. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:41, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:58, April 10, 2011 (UTC)