Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified space battle (Saesee Tiin)

Nominated by: JangFett (Talk) 02:32, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Jedi dreadlocks

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Unidentified space battle (Saesee Tiin)

Still looks good from the CAN.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:24, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
Per Cal. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
I miss the ol' Clone Wars, Plagueis327 05:23, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 05:40, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
Good stuff. Menkooroo 07:31, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:59, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

~~In the intro, I think it's worth mentioning the fleet that served with Tiin somehow. Otherwise, it sounds as if Tiin was ambushed on his own, which wasn't the case.~~
- How's that? JangFett ^(Talk) 05:31, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
"took out other tri-fighter droids near the Venator-class Star Destroyers": were the tri-fighters attacking the Star Destroyers? If they were, that would be better than saying they were simply "near" the cruisers. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:19, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
- No they weren't attacking. Basically during that scene, Anakin and the ARCs took out various tri-fighters near the Republic's Star Destroyers. Is the wording suitable since they were near and not attacking? JangFett ^(Talk) 05:31, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  - Yeah, I guess so, since there doesn't seem to be an alternative. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:40, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

A fantastic transition to the GAN page! I'm just wondering if you can vary the wording in the bio about Anakin's timely arrival and destruction of the droids, which is very similar to what's in the intro. Menkooroo 03:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Addressed JangFett ^(Talk) 07:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:58, January 17, 2012 (UTC)