Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified retired Galactic Republic pilot

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Unidentified retired Galactic Republic pilot

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 19:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Here's my small contribution to the barn-burner. Sorry, I couldn't do more; I'm kinda burnt out myself at the moment. Maybe I'll come up with more TPM stuff this month, but I'm not making promises.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Nice work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
2. Gern geschehen. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. Menkooroo 21:00, January 29, 2012 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
5. Though I'm not sure what warrants a "possible appearance" and what's speculation, but that is very minor. Otherwise, good job, rather came to like the character from reading the article. Hanzo Hasashi 22:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Kinda nitpicky, but can you give us some context for ruby bliels and the Invasion of Naboo?
  • Done.
• The man possessed eyes an odd color of gray, and a warm and ironic smile. The man...: Could you replace one of "the man(s)"?
  • And done.
• Nice work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:45, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Danke schön. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the Jedi

• Eras tag is missing.
  • Doh! Fixed.
• In the Bio quote, you have him listed as both "The pilot" and "The spacer." For consistency and more clarity, I think you should change "The spacer" to "The pilot" in both the Bio quote and the P&T quote.
  • Addressed.
• I also noticed a number of missing links, which I added in my copy-edit. You may want to take a look at it.
  • It's all good. If you think anything else's missing, feel free to add more links.
• Otherwise, a nice read.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pilot

• I recommend that you remove the "retired" from the infobox. I've always felt that character infoboxes should represent the character's entire life rather than the moment in time that they appear in canon.
  • Addressed.
    • Crap, should have been more specific. I meant this one. Sorry. Menkooroo 21:00, January 29, 2012 (UTC)
• Even if he asserts "countless," it's obviously not true --- as such, can you find a different word for the bio?
  • Addressed.
• Does the podrace at the beginning of the TPM novel take place at the Mos Espa Grand Arena? If so, can you mention and link it?
  • Done.
• Could a quote from Anakin's Fate lead off Behind the scenes?
  • Added.
• Great job! I was always intrigued by this character. I've redlinked his alter-ego in the BTS, by the way. Menkooroo 06:33, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:42, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:07, February 9, 2012 (UTC)