Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified public house

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified public house
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lew
        • 1.1.2.2 OOM
        • 1.1.2.3 Wok142
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified public house

  • Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 06:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 03:40, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 429 words (103 introduction, 278 body, 48 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 425 words (101 introduction, 276 body, 48 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject The High Republic

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote OOM 224 (he/him) 11:03, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:09, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. If I had a nickel for every time I've had to review something this week because I can't keep my mouth shut, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's wierd that it happened twice.NanoLuukeCloning Facility 18:16, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 23:16, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
  5. First review yay! Wok142 (talk) 03:34, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • The type field should be filled in Lewisr (talk) 05:51, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Done Sanathestarr (talk) 12:58, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
OOM
  • Nice work. Just one thing: I don't think it's necessary to specify a biographical detail like "on the other side of the room" in the intro. Perhaps something about the pub's physical characteristics would be more fitting. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:42, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
    • does the current version work? Sanathestarr (talk) 08:33, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
      • Looks brilliant OOM 224 (he/him) 11:03, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Wok142
  • I think "that he saw a pair of Evereni" in the intro should instead be "that he had seen a pair of Evereni," as it does in the body. Wok142 (talk) 17:54, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
    • done Sanathestarr (talk) 21:20, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:40, 16 March 2024 (UTC)