Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified planet 17 (Dilonexa system)

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Unidentified planet 17 (Dilonexa system)

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 15:55, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Finally getting around to my entry in the Dilonexa shed scorcher. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 15:55, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. I'm astonished how you managed to write all that in an article that had only 2 indirect mentions. Brilliant work.Winterz 16:23, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
2. NaruHina ^Talk 19:05, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:37, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:24, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
5. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:23, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 03:16, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Naru

• "The seventeenth planet was one of 40 spacial bodies in the Dilonexa system." This seems to imply that the planet itself was called "the seventeenth planet." Reword.
  • How's that? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 00:50, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
• "Once the New Republic took control of the galaxy[8] in 6 ABY,[9] the Centrality sector was again independent of galactic governments.[8] By 137 ABY, the planet was within the territory of the Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Krayt's Galactic Empire." These are copied directly from the original. Rephrase them, please.
  • Et voila. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 00:50, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
    • Good enough for me, but try shuffling phrase positions around next time. NaruHina ^Talk 19:05, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
• Thanks for contributing! The Dilonexa articles are still open to everyone! NaruHina ^Talk 23:03, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Sure thing! I chose the 17th because it's my birthday. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 00:50, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:16, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

1. Re: to Winterz: Thanks! Although I just adjusted the template. It's part of a project, similar to but smaller in scope than, the barn-burners. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 16:39, May 24, 2012 (UTC)