Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified female Imperial Knight

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Unidentified female Imperial Knight

Nominated by: Menkooroo 12:41, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Thought it would be a CAN, but it's currently at over 300 words.

Hope you do the others, as well.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:34, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
Grunny (talk) 22:01, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
Very well done, keep up the good work. VadersFist666 04:34, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
-- 1358 ^(Talk) 20:08, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
NaruHina ^Talk 21:10, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
is (II) to follow? --Eyrezer 01:44, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:04, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

The only problem I see is in this sentence, "He then proclaimed himself Galactic Emperor of a new Empire, and Fel and the remaining Imperial Knights were forced into exile." Instead of, ",and Fel and the remaining Imperial Knights were forced into exile." It should be, ",with Fel and the remaining Imperial Knights forced into exile." Other than this great article. VadersFist666 19:17, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
- I was going to disagree, but I looked at it again and came around. ^^ Changed! Menkooroo 04:28, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
  - Haha, I felt like a jerk even posting it, but I was like, "I like this article and I want it to sound good." Thank you very much for seeing my way. VadersFist666 04:33, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

~~I think it would be more appropriate to begin the intro with a mention of the Knight, rather than waiting until the end of the intro to introduce her.~~ That's all I've got. Very good work, as usual. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:46, July 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Tweaked it! Thanks for the advice; I think it's bettah now. Menkooroo 16:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:04, July 4, 2010 (UTC)