The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified female (Anchorhead)
- Nominated by: Darth Morrt 17:19, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Very short
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Looks good to me. Corellian Premier
All along the watchtower 21:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC) - I've told you kids to slow down! Hanzo Hasashi 23:42, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
- ~Savage
01:42, April 11, 2011 (UTC) 
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:57, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
Get off my yard! Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:07, April 16, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 18:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Jujiggum
Do we know for certain that she often chided "chided young farmboys who raced the streets at top speed"? Or do we just know of this one occasion?Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:11, March 25, 2011 (UTC)- Since she states "I've told you...", it has happened before. However, the term "farmboy" must be changed to something like "youngsters" or so. Kreivi Wolter 18:24, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Kreivi. Changed farmboy to youngster. Also moved the second quote back to the BTS, since it is an alternate. non-canon version of the first one. Darth Morrt 04:11, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- A couple things: firstly, I don't see how you can say that the novel's version of the quote is non-canon; the scene that was cut from the film is cut content and therefore is non-canon, but the novel itself is just as canon as the comic. Secondly, why don't you have a P&T? The statement in question in my original objection above would fit better there. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- P&T added. IIRC, I wasn't allowed to use alternate quotes in other nominations. The comic's quote matches the film's script, so I would say it is the canon version. Darth Morrt 09:21, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- But the scene was cut from the film, making it non-canon. So the novel quote is just as canon as the comic quote. Unless there's something else I'm missing here… Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:32, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, both quotes are equally canon. However, one should be the true in-Universe quote and the other an alternation. I have to chose one, and that would be the one mathcing the script. I would like to have the novel's quote in the BTS or not at all. Darth Morrt 17:53, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- I've just discovered that A New Hope: The Life of Luke Skywalker uses the same line as the comic and the script, so it's 3:1 against the novel. Darth Morrt 18:57, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
- But the scene was cut from the film, making it non-canon. So the novel quote is just as canon as the comic quote. Unless there's something else I'm missing here… Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:32, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- P&T added. IIRC, I wasn't allowed to use alternate quotes in other nominations. The comic's quote matches the film's script, so I would say it is the canon version. Darth Morrt 09:21, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- A couple things: firstly, I don't see how you can say that the novel's version of the quote is non-canon; the scene that was cut from the film is cut content and therefore is non-canon, but the novel itself is just as canon as the comic. Secondly, why don't you have a P&T? The statement in question in my original objection above would fit better there. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Kreivi. Changed farmboy to youngster. Also moved the second quote back to the BTS, since it is an alternate. non-canon version of the first one. Darth Morrt 04:11, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Since she states "I've told you...", it has happened before. However, the term "farmboy" must be changed to something like "youngsters" or so. Kreivi Wolter 18:24, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
The grammar in the P&T is atrocious.Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:32, March 27, 2011 (UTC)- Fixed, I think. Darth Morrt 17:53, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- I coincidentially fixed this when I saw some grammar that needed fixing. Hanzo Hasashi 23:42, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. Darth Morrt 01:37, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
- I coincidentially fixed this when I saw some grammar that needed fixing. Hanzo Hasashi 23:42, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed, I think. Darth Morrt 17:53, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged…
You should probably move the comic book image to the infobox and move the Lost Cut image to the BTS; as cut material, I don't think we can call the cut scene canon. ~Savage 16:47, April 10, 2011 (UTC)- "Are deleted scenes considered G-level? Yes, unless they conflict with something else seen in the films or if the reasoning behind deleting the scene keeps it from being continuity. [ADDENDUM: this applies only to deleted scenes publicly released]" [1] The scene itself is not publicly released, but this particular shot is. Darth Morrt 22:51, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
Cool. Add this to BTS? ~Savage 22:57, April 10, 2011 (UTC)- You mean something like this? Darth Morrt 00:14, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Yup. Nice work. ~Savage 01:42, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Yup. Nice work. ~Savage
- You mean something like this? Darth Morrt 00:14, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
- "Are deleted scenes considered G-level? Yes, unless they conflict with something else seen in the films or if the reasoning behind deleting the scene keeps it from being continuity. [ADDENDUM: this applies only to deleted scenes publicly released]" [1] The scene itself is not publicly released, but this particular shot is. Darth Morrt 22:51, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)
"Early in 0 BBY." Shouldn't that be late in 0 BBY, or early in 0 ABY? It was just a few days before the Battle of Yavin. Corellian Premier
All along the watchtower 18:16, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thanks. Darth Morrt 20:35, March 27, 2011 (UTC)