Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified dark-skinned Sith Saber

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Unidentified dark-skinned Sith Saber

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:23, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Part of LeeProject Sith Sabers and of course WP:LE

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 00:01, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:20, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:31, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:25, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 06:40, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • You should probably mention Shura by name in the intro.
    • Mentioned.
      • I would change the sentence to say, "the Saber along with Saber Shura and another Saber...."
  • Also in the Intro, you link to Unidentified female Sith Saber, which is a completely different character. I believe you meant to link to Unidentified male Sith Saber (Kesh). Please change this.
    • So many unidentified characters. Fixed.
  • Since you called the Saber "dark-skinned" in the intro, you should also say this in the first sentence of the Bio.
    • Added.
  • In the Bio, "There, the Sith Saber awaited Khai alongside two fellow Sith Sabers." First, you forgot to link the the Unidentified male Sith Saber (Kesh) again. Second, once again, you should mention Shura by name in this sentence.
    • Fixed.
  • That's all I have, nice job Lee. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:09, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • What does this have to do with this character? "Shura possessed the abilities required to achieve the rank of Sith Saber." Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:31, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:40, May 10, 2011 (UTC)