Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified air rodeo owner

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Unidentified air rodeo owner

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More Rodeo Thranta fun!

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:09, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
2. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:33, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
4. Damn you Space PETA! IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:50, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:09, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Context for Thrantas please.
  • How is this?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:39, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
• At some point after the owner married the man who became her husband: That sounds pretty meh, could you please reword.
  • I think I worded it a little bit better now.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:39, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
• Good work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:54, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the Jedi

• Nice article. Just one thing: "During the time the woman owned the rodeo and after she had been married to her husband, an animal rights group who wanted to stop traveling air rodeos, kidnapped her." - This sentence sounds confusing and clogged to me. Anyway you can make it sound a little better?—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:01, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is this better?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:32, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
    • Much better.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:09, April 12, 2012 (UTC)