Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Zabrak patron

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Unidentified Zabrak patron

  • Nominated by: NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:32, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The opening quote made Trak squee.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote After brief IRC-review Kilson(Let's have a chat) 00:28, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:38, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Pre-nom. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:36, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sing = priceless. CC7567 (talk) 07:48, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:03, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Lee attacks
  • Maybe add another sentence before the fact the first sentence in the bio. Something like: ... was a ... who lived during... Shortly after, the Zabrak was drinking.... ?
  • No quote for the bio?
  • Otherwise nice. What a pervert. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:45, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
    • You say "pervert." I say "braggart." You say "alert" and I say "avert." "Pervert." "Braggart." "Alert." "Avert." Let's call the whole thing off. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 18:30, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • I'm not sure if bolding "patron" in the intro is appropriate, seeing as the article itself is titled "Zabrak"? Perhaps rename the article to "Zabrak patron" or just bold "Zabrak"? 1358 (Talk) 18:28, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
    • "Patron" is bolded because that is his title, or lack thereof. It's the same thing as bolding something like "individual" in a case where there are no specifics about the character. While I don't really think the name change is necessary (still can't spell that correctly >.<), I'll do it if you insist. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 21:17, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
      • Articles should always strive to bold what is in the article title, which in this case is "Zabrak". If you want to keep the bolded patron, please go ahead and move it to "Unidentified Zabrak patron", but then you need to bold Zabrak too. 1358 (Talk) 19:09, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • If and until there are ever plural articles corresponding to Unidentified Zabrak patron, it's unnecessary for this article title to include the parenthetical descriptor. This article should be moved to that title for now. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:36, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, May 9, 2011 (UTC)


  • Oya. Thanks to Freddy and Trak for pre-nom reviews. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 18:39, April 24, 2011 (UTC)