Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Wookiee base (gundark attack)

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Unidentified Wookiee base (gundark attack)

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 11:55, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: If only I'd been here for the Wookiee barn-burner. Thanks to Za'rath for the image.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:15, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:55, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:32, June 9, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:44, June 9, 2014 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:07, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• A little bit info on the power core (description section) would be nice. Was it used to get energy?
  • Added
• Is there a name given by the Guide for the base?
  • Nope, and I've now added an Imo tag. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:12, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
• Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:25, April 29, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• As a preliminary, this article should use the structure infobox, not the city one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:43, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
  • This article isn't about a singular structure though, but a full base. The command center is the only one pictured as the player can choose where to put the other ones. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:29, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
    • I see. Very well.
• I've rewritten this sentence to avoid passive voice, but I find it unsatisfactory overall, as the Wookiees built several bases on Alaris Prime, not just "a base." Please find a better way to word this sentence that takes this fact into account: "Wookiee laborers built a base on Alaris Prime, a moon of the gas giant Alaris."
  • I've had a go, but I'm not sure how good it is.
    • I've rewritten it, again to avoid passive voice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:11, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Does the game refer to the Wookiees as warriors or soldiers? Because there's a certain difference in meaning in respect to our linking. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:31, June 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • It calls them warriors, but now I've changed the link so that it goes to Bowcaster trooper, which is a more specific article for these warriors. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:35, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
• You have infobox-exclusive info in the form of the mention of 21 Wookiees populating the base. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:11, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • It's kind of already in their, if you add up the ten workers, ten troopers and Chewie, but should I still state it directly? Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:57, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
    • Hmm, yeah, ok. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:32, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• Expanded with newly discovered information from the strategy guide. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 11:46, May 25, 2014 (UTC)
• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:07, June 13, 2014 (UTC)