Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified WED-15 Treadwell (Lars homestead)

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Unidentified WED-15 Treadwell (Lars homestead)

  • Nominated by: Darth Morrt 10:20, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Ugly one-sentence intro. What should I do?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Although I did it for you this time, remember to reload the infobox in the future. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 01:34, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
  2. I looked and looked but I couldn't find anything wrong with the article, good job.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:07, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
  3. This is a good article.--Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters) 08:12, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 02:29, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • For the Intro, I recommend adding some info from the Characteristics section, maybe the part about how the droid would follow around sandflies.
    • Done. Thanks for the advice. Darth Morrt 17:03, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • You some Infobox-exclusive info, including the droid's color scheme and the fact that it had manipulator arms, both of which should be added to the Characteristics section.
  • It sounds as if Owen Lars is referring to the Treadwell droid when he says he doesn't need another droid. If so, that quote could be added to the top of the article. Also, you could add that info to the History section.
    • The problem is that Lars got more Treadwells. If I look at only the radio drama, he most likely refers to WED-15-77, but other sources identify it dead by the time of the Jawa auction. And there is another Treadwell, which I think doesn't have an article jet, on page 129 of Complete locations, next to the Lars famaly speeder. This an it a red-and-grey Septoid variant Treadwell. Lars could refer to any of these droids, not just this one. Darth Morrt 17:03, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
      • Fair enough.
  • Otherwise, looks good. Welcome back to the GAN Morrt. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • My apologies, one more. Could you mention in both the Intro and History a time period, by that I mean "during the Galactic Civil War" or something. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 17:31, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)