Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Twi'lek administrator

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Unidentified Twi'lek administrator

  • Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 22:16, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Ima Back.

(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)

Support

Object

Xd1358
  • The dialogue templates need to be changed to quote templates per this CT.
    • Oh, a new rule. Thanks for pointing that out. Kreivi Wolter 16:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • No redlinks are allowed in the intro.
    • Embarrassing mistake... Kreivi Wolter 16:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • Check your image caption punctuation.
    • Uh, come again? Kreivi Wolter 16:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
      • Per this CT, image captions should only end in a period if the sentence is complete. 1358 (Talk) 17:15, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure "mind tricked" is a proper word.
    • At least the FA Luuke Skywalker makes a use of it in the intro... Kreivi Wolter 16:40, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
      • Another, established user agreed it's not a proper word, and I've removed the instance from Luuke. "perform a mind trick" is better English. 1358 (Talk) 17:15, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • Grammatical errors throughout.
    • Noted. (darn!) Working on it. Stand by.
  • "…likely in a position of administrator." Speculation.
    • Well, actually, he was only speculated to be an administrator by Kenobi. It wasn't confirmed in anyway, but it is his only call name in the comic. Uh, now that you mention, can even the article use the title "administrator"?
      • The article should be moved, then. 1358 (Talk) 17:15, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • More later. 1358 (Talk) 07:18, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • Maybe you could mention in the Bts that his outfit completely matches Bib Fortuna's EP6 cloth. Darth Morrt 10:54, January 22, 2011 (UTC)
    • Well, I'll be damned... this character does not only wear Fortuna's suit, I think he catually is Fortuna! I'll need to find a source for that, and then the article and this nomination must be removed. Thank you for pointing that out. Kreivi Wolter 12:27, January 22, 2011 (UTC)
      • He could be Fortuna, but he is not identified in the webcomic and nothing was referenced from this comic by other sources yet. I also think that he will be revealed to be Fortuna, despite that his eye color in the comic is not red. His master is most likely Jabba. Kenobi's line to the Administrator is nearly identical to Luke's line to Fortuna in the Jedi: "You will take me to Jabba/your master, now." Also, info from the current last pages of the comic is missing from the article. Darth Morrt 13:02, January 22, 2011 (UTC)
        • I will not update the article until this has been worked out. Kreivi Wolter 14:15, January 22, 2011 (UTC)
  • Can this nomination be removed? Thanks. Kreivi Wolter 19:59, January 24, 2011 (UTC)