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Unidentified Togruta (Jarl)
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:29, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The first GAN of several from this story
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- Samonic
09:29, 21 July 2022 (UTC) 
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:19, 10 September 2022 (UTC)- VergenceScatter (talk) 16:50, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor Holocomm 06:01, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 07:07, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
Object
CC-8
I'd like it to be clear as to how Dex was deceiving the crewCommander Code-8 Hello There! 01:10, 20 August 2022 (UTC)- I don't see what other details are needed - the recording says it's on Shara'Tam and provides coordinates, which Dex claims places Shara'Tam in the Ishram system. This is a lie, but Jarl only has this Togruta check info about the Ishram system and doesn't check the coordinates himself, so when the datapad confirms that the Ishram system was destroyed, he assumes that Shara'Tam is also destroyed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:41, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
- What I think needs to be made clear in the article is that Shara'Tam wasn't in the Ishram system Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:38, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:16, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
- What I think needs to be made clear in the article is that Shara'Tam wasn't in the Ishram system Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:38, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
- I don't see what other details are needed - the recording says it's on Shara'Tam and provides coordinates, which Dex claims places Shara'Tam in the Ishram system. This is a lie, but Jarl only has this Togruta check info about the Ishram system and doesn't check the coordinates himself, so when the datapad confirms that the Ishram system was destroyed, he assumes that Shara'Tam is also destroyed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:41, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
Vergence
Being ashen-faced at one point isn't a personality trait, it's just an emotion. I think it should be moved to the history section.- An emotion is often a display of personality, and there's not much else to put in that section anyway.
- Sometimes it is, but being upset when something you cared about is lost isn't one of those times. I think you can just remeove the section.
- Fine, done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:50, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
- Sometimes it is, but being upset when something you cared about is lost isn't one of those times. I think you can just remeove the section.
- An emotion is often a display of personality, and there's not much else to put in that section anyway.
Not a big deal, but is there a reason you used the drawn image of Dexter instead of a live-action one?VergenceScatter (talk) 05:32, 10 September 2022 (UTC)- The drawn one is from the story he appears in. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:03, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
- Ah, fair enough VergenceScatter (talk) 14:18, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
- The drawn one is from the story he appears in. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:03, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:07, 4 October 2022 (UTC)