Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Swokes Swokes 2 (Yeb Yeb Adem'thorn)

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Unidentified Swokes Swokes 2 (Yeb Yeb Adem'thorn)

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another Swokes Swokes

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:15, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Hungry Hungry Swokes, SWOKES! Menkooroo 21:39, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Voting now again! ~SavageBOB sig 02:37, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Good work. JangFett (Talk) 18:36, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
  6. —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cal Jedi
  • "At the time, the Queen called for a Vote of No Confidence in the Republic's Supreme Chancellor, Finis Valorum, the three Swokes Swokes were present in a Senate repulsorpod, where they raised their arms in response." - I think this is supposed to be two sentences.
  • That's all for now.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 06:00, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
Swokes!
  • If the identity of the blob with the protocol droid is unclear, couldn't it just as easily be this guy? This BTS should probably have the same info as the other one.
    • Added.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
      • Can you add a little bit more onto the end of the BTS? The current sentence doesn't really explain why the Swokes Swokes in the "protocol droid" entry might not necessarily be this guy. I mean, it's possible there was a protocol droid with him at some other time, isn't it? I think some mention needs to be made that that Swokes Swokes could be either one of the aides. Menkooroo 21:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
        • Hmmm, I'm not sure how to do this with making it sound like speculation. Any suggestions?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 21:16, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
          • Something like "It is unclear which of Ademthorn's companions the picture represents" would be speculation-free. Menkooroo 21:22, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
            • It seems to me that it could still be another Swokes Swokes, so I tried to show that possibility. If this is okay should I add this to the other guy who is already a GA?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 21:31, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
              • Go for it! Menkooroo 21:39, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Like with the other blob, could the intro be trimmed a little bit? It's almost as long as the bio, and the bit about the Trade Federation is missing context that would enlargen it some more. Menkooroo 06:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • Do we really know this dude served Adem'thorn? I mean, maybe that's his mom or something.
  • It might be worth noting that The Phantom Menace was the first appearance not only of this dude, but his species. Maybe not; I'll leave it up to you. Nice work! ~SavageBOB sig 00:57, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:25, January 2, 2012 (UTC)


  • This guy and the other Swokes Swokes show that CAs for TPM are going to be hard to come by.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)