Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Sith soldier (South Apartments)

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Unidentified Sith soldier (South Apartments)

• Nominated by: SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 02:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:KOTOR.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. After a couple of minor edits. Nice. –Victor ^{(talk page)} 05:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Pre-nom reviewed. Cylka^-talk- 15:50, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
3. Nice and clean, Soresu. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:15, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
4. Mauser^Comlink 14:41, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 12:09, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Mauser:
   • Any chance you can get a better picture for the infobox?
     • I don't see what's wrong with the current one. Could you explain?
       • Can you get one that shows his face better, like with this one?
         • Sorry, but you never get a close-up of his face. That's the best there is. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
   • The second image needs to be cropped to better show the soldier, not the entire scene.
     • Cropped. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 08:01, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
       • Sorry to bother you again, but can you capture the same frame with higher resolution? The current one looks to "pixelized". I'm sure that will improve the article. Mauser^Comlink 11:05, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
         • Recaptured and uploaded at maximum quality. KotOR isn't really known for its graphics quality, but I hope its a bit better. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Do not link to redirects. South Apartments is one example, not sure if there are others.
     • I was planning on making an article for that, which is why I left a link there.
       • I've removed it for now. As soon as I can get a good article onto the site, I'll put the link back in. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 05:44, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Intro could be expanded.
     • Expanded.
       • Now you have no context on his battle droids and where they came from in the bio.
         • Whoops. Rectified, I believe.
           • Please excuse me, I was meaning to say "in the intro". Can you just say that he conducted a raid with 2 Sentinel droids, that should do it. Mauser^Comlink 11:05, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
             • I thought as much. I could swear I fixed that up yesterday. Never mind, done for certain this time. I'll get around to the images soon, once I get the game reinstalled. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 05:07, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
   • The second setntence of the bio start a little abruptly. One minute you are talking about Sith Empire, next - about Endar Spire. Needs rewording.
     • I reads perfectly fine to me. Any suggestions?
       • Sorry, I meant the third sentence.
         • I tried to link the sentence back to the fleet. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:12, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Revan should probably be refered to as amnestic Sith Lord, not a simple soldier.
     • I hope that you don't mind, Soresu, but I'll answer this since I was the one who suggested this. For the purpose of this article, referring to Revan as an amnesiac Sith Lord will require way too much context and has no bearing on the actual soldier. Cylka^-talk- 15:50, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
   • The blockade of Taris was to prevent escape of Bastila Shan, not Revan and Onasi.
     • Mentioning Bastile would mean a heap more context, so I changed it to "any survivors" instead, which the Sith were trying to do.
   • Context for the Upper City.
     • Done.
   • "left their room to find the soldier arguing with two Duros residents" - looks like they were deliberately looking for him, reword.
     • Tweaked. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:53, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
   • I don't understand why do you use Caderous' databank entry as a reference for the Blockade.
     • Again, I'll answer. There has been some debate as to when the blockade was put into effect, and the databank entry is the only solid source that states the blockade was put into effect after the destruction of the Endar Spire. Cylka^-talk- 15:50, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Maybe more to come. Mauser^Comlink

Comments

• GA #2 for me. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 02:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
• Not objection-worthy, but is there a reason the {{Clear}} template is in there? It doesn't seem to be doing anything. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:15, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Removed. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 05:41, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:09, 8 July 2009 (UTC)