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Unidentified Sith communications officer

  • Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A character that appears for about 1 page in Allies

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Imperialles 21:44, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Good read. JangFett (Talk) 23:04, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
  3. -- 1358 (Talk) 18:08, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:36, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:37, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object

L'Imperialles
  • Intro: "During a mission to ally with" This makes it seem like only the ship was seeking to ally with Abeloth. "secure/forge an alliance with" or something might be preferable.
    • Changed.
  • It's a bit context-heavy, but all of my attempts to condense the text saw the body crumble like a Jenga puzzle, so I suppose it's alright. Furthermore, that has to be the stupidest thing the Lost Tribe could ever do. "Let's raid a religious monument guarded by one of the oldest and most powerful forces in the universe! derr…" --Imperialles 17:06, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I'm expecting Taalon to have some big extravagant plan for using the "lost" wintrium samples, because it definitely was not a very smart idea :P. Thanks for the review, Imp. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:41, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:37, June 26, 2010 (UTC)


  • As a preemptive comment: I tried to cut down some on the context in both the intro and bio, but I believe that all of the context that remains is necessary, because it all relates to the character's mission or else is background information that's needed in order for parts of the article to make sense. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)
  • Not an objection, but could you possibly add an image of something related to him? -- 1358 (Talk) 18:08, June 21, 2010 (UTC)
    • IMO, it's a little too short to have an image, but that's Jon's call, of course. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:34, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
      • Yeah, I thought about it, but there aren't really any available images that I feel are related enough. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:58, June 24, 2010 (UTC)