Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Sith Saber (Ben Skywalker victim)

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Unidentified Sith Saber (Ben Skywalker victim)

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:54, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Simply to large for CA

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ben isn't as good as his father, but he can still kill people just as good as any.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
   • His father will follow soon :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. Good work.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:08, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:00, December 15, 2011 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
5. JangFett ^(Talk) 22:32, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Object

The_Cal_Jedi has returned!

• "Together with two other Sith Sabers and Annax, the Human ambushed exiled Jedi Grand Master Luke Skywalker, his son, Jedi Knight Ben Skywalker, and fugitive Sith apprentice Vestara Khai, who also searched for Abeloth, in the town of Kesla Vein." - This sentence seems to drag on and get confusing. It should be reworded so it is more clear and readable.
  • Please try. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:53, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
    • It looks pretty good, but it sounds like Luke's son and Ben Skywalker are two different people. If you could maybe put an — or something in there to clarify, that would be good.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:04, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
      • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:22, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
        • Much better.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
• Needs Category:Unidentified Sith
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:53, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
• Otherwise, good work.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:00, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:53, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Are there article for the other two Sith Sabers? If so, then you should link them, otherwise they will need to be redlinked. Per the GAN rules, an article under 500 words can only have one redlink, so you will need to create at least one of the two articles. In my opinion, it would be better to write at least a stub for both if they do not have articles already. Other than that, the article is good.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, there are. And they will follow soon :P Pipelinked both in the bio. Thansk for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:35, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Do we really know for certain that this guy was born on Kesh or that his homeworld was Kesh? Even if that's stated for all (or most) Lost Tribe members, I feel uncomfortable making that assumption, at least for the part about his birth. Could you explain? CC7567 ^(talk) 03:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, we know it. The Sith had no way of leaving Kesh and therefore he must come from that planet. It is said many times in the whole series. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:32, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

• Also, here's the CAnom.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)