Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Republic APC driver

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Unidentified Republic APC driver

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:06, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Meteor...

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 02:00, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
2. Winterz (talk) 23:23, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 04:32, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
4. Nice work. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:03, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
5. Menkooroo (talk) 07:47, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Winterz, le creator
   • Besides the recruit's, I think you should also mention the rest of the crew/squad's fate, the ones that went with Gearbox.
     • We don't really know what happened to them after the recruit leaves, so I mentioned that everyone survived the missiles except the driver.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:19, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
       • Actually, if I'm not mistaken, Gearbox states that he'll regroup the survivors, preparing them for a possible Separatist ground attack, while the Trooper goes for the missile launchers. Afterwards, Gearbox gets the survivors back to Fort Garnik. Winterz (talk) 21:59, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
         • I can't seem to find any quotes that mention that. The closest thing that I found was that he said that he could handle defending himself while he tried to salvage the transport.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:05, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
           • You're right, that's enough. Winterz (talk) 23:22, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
   • Not sure about this, may sound a little awkward, but in the P&t section is it worth mentioning that his piloting skills weren't enough to evade the missiles? Or something like that. Winterz (talk) 03:55, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
     • Seems good, added.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:19, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
2. APC
   • The infobox lists Republic Army, but the intro and body only place him in the Republic Military without specifying the Republic Army.
     • I meant to say Republic Army.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 06:00, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
   • Any other applicable categories? Pilots, maybe, or Category:Republic Army personnel? I think that latter one would be a better choice than the current Category:Galactic Republic soldiers, since the article doesn't call him a soldier. Menkooroo (talk) 05:53, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 06:00, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:14, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

Why have you put quotes in the article body but none in the intro? Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 08:49, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

• Hmmm, I guess I forgot to put a quote there, added another quote.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:25, December 12, 2012 (UTC)