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Unidentified Quarren (Lula Talisola)

  • Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 15:52, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Found this creepy Quarren when writing up Ishnar's article
  • Date Archived: 05:08, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 571 words (140 introduction, 367 body, 64 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 574 words (156 introduction, 354 body, 64 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS, WP:THR

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support votes

  1. Creepy guy. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 08:41, 29 July 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Asssuming Lew's solved.—spookywillowwtalk 20:46, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 17:51, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote CometSmudge (talk) 21:36, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:07, 26 August 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Fan
Intro
  • "A Quarren was present at a cantina on the planet Eiram not long after the space station Starlight Beacon had been annihilated in the atmosphere above the planet." Swap "annihilated" with "destroyed" and just introduce to Starlight as an orbiting space station so you can scrap the "in the atmosphere above the planet". Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
  • The date should be in the first sentence, not the second, of the intro in this case. Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
  • The second sentence of the second paragraph does not need to begin with "Although," Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
  • "Talisola, confused, proceeded to steal the starship belonging to the Quarren and vowed to survive in the unrest of the galaxy." You don't need to contextualise the starship's owner again, it's already been made clear it was the Quarren's ship. Additionally, "survive in the unrest of the galaxy" is unnecessary information for the intro. It's too vague–giving no context on what unrest is happening–and clarifying it would add too much information irrelevant to the Quarren to be necessary for the intro of the article. Fan26 (Talk) 21:23, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
    • Removed starship being owned by Quarren and "survive in the unrest of the galaxy" Chipchip88 (talk) 23:37, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
Biography
  • Saying S. Beacon was destroyed by saboteurs is too vague; clarifying it was the Nihil is fine here. Fan26 (Talk) 21:27, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
    • Clarified Chipchip88 (talk) 23:37, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
      • "by the Nihil" is a much more correct phrasing than "due to Nihil" Fan26 (Talk) 14:50, 23 July 2025 (UTC)
  • "While present inside the cantina[1] in 230 BBY,[3] the lost Jedi Padawan Lula Talisola...stumbled into the tavern and approached the bar top, " This sentence needs to be reworded. It sounds like it is describe Talisola as present inside the cantina before then saying she "stumbled into the tavern", contradicting itself. It would seem that it's trying to say the Quarren is present inside the cantina, but this was already established in the prior sentence. Fan26 (Talk) 14:50, 23 July 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • It looks like she is recalling the story to Zeen Lewisr (talk) 17:50, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
  • Cham Cham isn't really Lula's pet, Zeen just asked her to look after him while she was away Lewisr (talk) 17:50, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
  • The year for the recollection should be added Lewisr (talk) 05:26, 16 August 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:07, 26 August 2025 (UTC)