Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Nihil (Gavi) (second nomination)

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Unidentified Nihil (Gavi)

  • Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 22:55, 23 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Round two
  • Date Archived: 05:21, 19 March 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 487 words (95 introduction, 336 body, 56 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 469 words (98 introduction, 315 body, 56 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS, WP:THR

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 03:18, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:50, 16 March 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:11, 18 March 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:05, 19 March 2025 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think the Warden should be contextualized as a warlord, is a bit more relevant to his status now than a disgraced enforcer (citable to issue 13) Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The issue indicates that Escape from Valo was a few months prior, so I'd switch the mention of it being a year before to that Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Since not of the Nihil on Valo were killed (some were taken into custody), I'd go with the issue's line that the forces were depleted instead Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • You can cut the reference for Gavi being a youngling since the issue mentions it when first introducing him Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Gavi's pronouns aren't citable to the issue Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • There looks to be some sort of fur that the Nihil is wearing which should be noted in the equipment when talking about the armor Lewisr (talk) 06:27, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 18:17, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
      • To note, only the first use of pronouns needs to be cited Lewisr (talk) 19:45, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • One more thing, when you talk about the the Nihil forces being depleted before, I think you should mention that Valo is believed by the Nihil to still be occupied, and then they were unaware the forces had actually been depleted and it was only under the pretense of still being occupied Lewisr (talk) 19:45, 23 February 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:05, 19 March 2025 (UTC)