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Unidentified Munificent-class star frigate (Patitite Pattuna)
- Nominated by: TK999 21:47, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Flanker of Grievous's flagship.
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Return of the Jedi
- Why do you refer to the other ship in the article simply as "Munificent?" I believe that should be changed to "Munificent-class star frigate."
- On that same note, I think that other Munificent-class star frigate should get its own article.
You should list the full battle name in the History, rather than pipelinking it with just showing "attack."- On second look, the Battle of Patitite Pattuna article has a {{Conjecture}} template on it. So the intro needs to be changed accordingly.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 23:20, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
- On second look, the Battle of Patitite Pattuna article has a {{Conjecture}} template on it. So the intro needs to be changed accordingly.—Cal Jedi
- The fact that Adi Gallia's ship was destroyed needs to be mentioned in the History, as you state in the intro.
- That's all for now.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 23:18, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
Lee's charge
Link for the "Corporate Union" in the intro.during the galactic conflict called the Clone Wars: As the Clone Wars were not "the" only galactic conflict, please change this.- Per my count, the article is at 200 words and therefore way to short for the GAN. Also, you should cut down the intro as it is more than the body. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:41, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
Idle objection for over a month now. I left a message on TK's talk page about it, but he has yet to respond there or here.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 15:05, February 17, 2012 (UTC)