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Unidentified Keshiri Sith
- Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:21, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Minor Sith in the Lost Tribe from Fate of the Jedi: Abyss; thanks to CC7567 for the suggestion :P
(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Excellent choice :) JangFett Talk 17:26, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 20:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 09:47, September 22, 2009 (UTC) - SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 21:45, September 22, 2009 (UTC)
- Good work.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 22:52, September 23, 2009 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:24, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
Object
- Soresu
You should probably mention her ability to use a lightsaber and parang in the P&T.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:11, September 22, 2009 (UTC)- Addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:10, September 22, 2009 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
Unless I'm reading this wrong, basic grammatical error here; dangling modifier. This is literally saying that Ship recovered Ship from a planet in the Maw. Please revise: "After recovering Ship from a planet in the Maw, the Meditation Sphere transported the strike team to Sinkhole Station"- Addressed.
This is a pretty baseless, generic claim, unless the novel literally classifies her as "brave." You can pretty much say every being ever created for the Star Wars universe is brave because they did something, so please avoid using this kind of statement as filler in the P/Ts of your future articles: "She was also brave, fearlessly attacking the Grand Master of the Jedi Order."Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:04, September 28, 2009 (UTC)- Addressed and noted; thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 21:20, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:24, September 28, 2009 (UTC)