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Unidentified Keredian

  • Nominated by: Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 16:46, 20 March 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: YOU ARE DONE
  • Date Archived: 21:52, 18 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 693 words (191 introduction, 443 body, 59 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 662 words (188 introduction, 428 body, 46 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions

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Support votes

  1. ACvote CometSmudge (talk) 19:31, 24 March 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 06:20, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 12:18, 18 April 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 17:58, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Comet
  • There's a few sentences that are either run ons or could use some grammar fixes- The ones beginning with "A newcomer to the Golak Mahal" , "The dishes of food around the courtyard" "The Inquisitor Force pushed Rani"
  • Do we know for certain that the Ugnaught actually threw the loaf? It may be better to just state that he claimed it, because it doesn't happen on screen and the Ugnaught denies it. CometSmudge (talk) 19:00, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
    • I believe I've fixed the issues, let me know what you think! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 20:31, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
  • The Inquisitor being referred to as a Jedi hunter is technically intro exclusive, and I also think it would be good to contextulize them as that when they're first introduced in the body. CometSmudge (talk) 22:00, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
    • Swapped the "alien" descriptor for "Jedi hunting." Thoughts? Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 14:10, 24 March 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • The intro could be split, as it would look a bit cleaner than one giant paragraph Lewisr (talk) 22:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
    • Split it, couldn't really get it even but I split it where it would make sense.Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 00:00, 7 April 2025 (UTC)
      • Made a slight change which I think works Lewisr (talk) 06:20, 13 April 2025 (UTC)
  • I noticed the Keredian was in the episode guide's episode gallery on SW.com, do recommend checking these sources listed on the page in the event he's pictured or imo'ed or whatever in any others Lewisr (talk) 22:06, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
    • Yeah I checked all those sources and even the episode guide but I didn't spot him there, thank you for pointing it out! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 00:00, 7 April 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • For any sort of TV-thing (animated or LA) we don't list written or directed by. The only exception would be if it was "X person commented... " as some sort of BTS info, but if its just there to be there, then we never do.—spookywillowwtalk 00:14, 16 April 2025 (UTC)
    • Objection discussed via discord Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 05:02, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
      • Leaving an onsite record that this is only being struck due to Visions oddities; for any other installment media, we still do not list either of these (nor should we, for several reasons).—spookywillowwtalk 12:18, 18 April 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:58, 18 April 2025 (UTC)