Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Imperial saboteur

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Unidentified Imperial saboteur

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:39, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I was bored.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Always a good reason. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:56, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 19:01, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
  3. AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 19:23, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:08, August 26, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 19:59, August 26, 2014 (UTC)
  6. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:28, September 3, 2014 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 14:01, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • "...self-proclaimed clone Sith Lord X1's faction..." He's a self proclaimed clone? :P
    • Fixed.
  • Skills and abilities could possibly mention how he was trained to resist Jedi mind tricks, though since he never showed those skills, it's up to you if you want to add it. 501st dogma(talk) 23:52, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • I believe the mention in the P&T is sufficient. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:25, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
Floyd
  • I'd just like a touch of context on what X1 was doing in the intro. Just something about his fight against the NR.
  • I have to agree with dogma here: his talent with resisting mind tricks has to be in the S&A. It is a skill, and an ability. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 05:22, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • Can you reword the first sentence of the bio a bit? As is, it sounds like the splinter faction was led by two different individuals.
  • Likewise with the sentence where X2 is introduced. It sounds like X2 and a Jedi Knight were both present. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:15, August 27, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Is there a specific reason why the article categorizes him as a generic Galactic Empire military person and not in one of the Imperial Army categories?
    • Not particularly. I did not look well enough in the categories, I guess. Fixed.
  • Going along with the preceding objection, his uniform and helmet are clearly that of an Imperial Army pilot, which I think should be noted in the Equipment section. Though you may have to search for a specific secondary source to cite that claim to. I'm not sure if the game itself provides this info.
    • This should be good enough, I think.
  • As a reviewing note, I cut out the Skills and abilities, which was just kind of regurgitating the P/T info and was rather unnecessary. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:22, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
    • I actually completely agree with you on this one. I wasn't too keen on adding that section in the first place, but I did so because I expected people to object on the lack of it. If you don't think it's necessary, I don't particularly care, either. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:19, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:01, September 3, 2014 (UTC)