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Unidentified Imperial prisoner (Level 4)
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:26, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: He died for Kino Loy's character development.
- Date Archived: 16:11, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
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Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 23:29, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 18:35, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:28, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:09, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Object
Ziara
During the time of the Galactic Empire, the male individual served a sentence under the government prisoner and was held in the Imperial prison errr might wanna reword this, particularly the "governemnt prisoner" partgot a duplicate link- These were the result of a change I'd not finished; mistake on my part. Both fixed.
The Imperial prisoner worked on Level 4 of the facility until[2] during 5 BBY, i feel like this sentence would flow better if it was judt "until 5BBY". what do you think?BloodOfIrizi(talk) 23:34, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- Am trying my best to avoid conveying that his sentence might have ended the moment it was 5 BBY, so hope this wording looks better. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:26, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:09, 16 February 2023 (UTC)