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Unidentified Imperial governor (Pipada)

  • Nominated by: Mor9347 (talk) 03:53, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sa'Kalla! again...
  • Date Archived: 03:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 294 words (92 introduction, 178 body, 24 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 323 words (116 introduction, 179 body, 28 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFG WP:AMB

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Wok142 (talk) 04:53, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
  2. CometSmudge (talk) 01:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:42, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 03:08, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok
  • In the intro, I think you should mention the governor as being part of the forces that were shredded, similar to how you do in the body Wok142 (talk) 04:16, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Done! anything you'd change? Mor9347 (talk) 01:06, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
      • Looks good! Wok142 (talk) 04:53, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • The source doesn't specifically include the governor as one of the Imperials killed, so I don't think there's enough to say for sure that they died.
  • Sa'Kalla being young and popular is intro-exclusive
  • Since they're only mentioned in one source, the BTS can just say mentioned instead of first mentioned.CometSmudge (talk) 00:30, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • In this case, the intro to body length ratio is quite skewed. For an article of this length, the introduction should usually be about half of what it is now, if not less, and needn't generally restate the body in full (checking the Jocasta length may help visualize this: it's currently 120/180).—spookywillowwtalk 04:42, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
    • It's been cut down by around 30 words. Mor9347 (talk) 11:21, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)